Comments on: WIP Clip Wednesday http://kaitnolan.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/ Action packed paranormal romance Mon, 13 Feb 2012 21:11:27 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Jess http://kaitnolan.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/#comment-609 Fri, 09 Nov 2007 14:35:54 +0000 http://seanachi.wordpress.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/#comment-609 You’re right; it is fun. Thanks for sharing. :)

]]> By: seanchaí http://kaitnolan.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/#comment-593 Thu, 08 Nov 2007 20:30:38 +0000 http://seanachi.wordpress.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/#comment-593 This is just a snip of a much larger scene. It fits in context there, but the whole thing was too long to post, and I thought this was fun.

]]> By: Jess http://kaitnolan.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/#comment-592 Thu, 08 Nov 2007 20:20:43 +0000 http://seanachi.wordpress.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/#comment-592 I like it! It’s great back-and-forth!

But.

It’s great back-and-forth. What’s its purpose in the story? What’s the conflict in this scene? Or, is this just a beat of a larger scene in which something does happen? :)

I ask only because I have a bad habit of writing banter or argument that doesn’t push the story forward.

]]> By: Susan B. http://kaitnolan.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/#comment-573 Wed, 07 Nov 2007 18:11:06 +0000 http://seanachi.wordpress.com/2007/11/07/wip-clip-wednesday-5/#comment-573 I didn’t realize when I was just talking to you that we were both taking clips from dinner today. Now I’m hungry.

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