Til Death: 568
Daily Goal: Not met
Okay, so I was a little shy of where I wanted to be today, though I have some overage from yesterday. I had anticipated getting started on the love scene this evening, but Pot pointed out some AYKB issues with the beginning of their conversation (AYKB= as you know, Bob), so I wound up fleshing out the scene a bit more to correct those. And then re-reading it I didn’t actually believe that she was into the idea of a love scene. There wasn’t the necessary emotional lead up. And as proper portrayal of emotion is something I’ve vowed to work on, I did some work tonight on beefing up and fleshing out where her head is during this conversation. So while I didn’t get as many words as I would like, I do think I set up for the love scene that’s coming up in the next chapter. I believe her now. It may not be glorious and fantastic, but I think it’s an improvement, so maybe I’ve learned something.