Flash Point: 799
Daily Goal: Met
So I did some reworking of the beginning to start things more in the action. Our hero Holt is rushing into a burning house to save the occupants. And the sole occupants, are our heroine Stella and her dog. He gets them out just in time and theres a tense moment while he has to do mouth to mouth. I left her just breathing again. Tomorrow she’ll open her eyes.
I’ve always believed in starting with action! 🙂