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Daily Progress Report

HOC: 1454

Daily Goal: Met

Well I finally sucked it up and wrote the flashback to show the history between the hero and heroine.  It’s not too bad.  More cynical than the dream I used to show the same stuff in the last version.  I like it better.  I also went back and rewrote part of yesterday’s scene.  I had sort of descended into some upset and angst, when the heroine was really mostly angry, so I needed to show that better.  I’m happier with it now.  I also fleshed out the conversation between Collin and Malachi (Kensie’s partner).  I didn’t get a whole lot further, but I did sort of figure out tomorrow’s progression.  Time for bed now.

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