HOC: 1454
Daily Goal: Met
Well I finally sucked it up and wrote the flashback to show the history between the hero and heroine. It’s not too bad. More cynical than the dream I used to show the same stuff in the last version. I like it better. I also went back and rewrote part of yesterday’s scene. I had sort of descended into some upset and angst, when the heroine was really mostly angry, so I needed to show that better. I’m happier with it now. I also fleshed out the conversation between Collin and Malachi (Kensie’s partner). I didn’t get a whole lot further, but I did sort of figure out tomorrow’s progression. Time for bed now.