Daily Goal: Met
Well after a long and irritating “I Hate My Book” Day, I think I’m getting back on track. On the list of changes I wanted to make, I’m about half done. I rewrote the front half of Chapter 7 (MUCH HAPPIER), added some stuff to the middle scene there and tacked on some more to the beginning of the dinner scene. I also went through and added a handful of lines here and there earlier on as groundwork for the stuff that comes later. Tomorrow’s plan on Day 1 of Sweat, Round 3, is to rewrite her reaction to his side of the story and the conversation with the killer. And then…we’ll see where we are. Pot and I are currently brainstorming for a nickname Kensie uses when she’s annoyed with her partner. He tends to call her “woman” or “skinny” when he’s annoyed. He’s a 220 pound ex-linebacker from south central Georgia. Big, tough black man (we love Malachi). What can she call him when she’s annoyed? I am open for suggestions. The current placeholder is “overgrown Neanderthal”.